Personal branding // Updated business card mock up

At this moment I intend to send my business cards off to get printed professionally as I do not have time to hand print my stationary like I would wish. However at this current stage I just wanted to create a visual that would give some understanding of what they would be presented like, therefore I have mocked up the image below.

Personal Branding // Updated Business Card

For my personal brandng, I was actually quite happy with the visual side of my actual logo, but I think they way I have applied it to some of my stationary diesign does not could be updated to fit a style that I think suits me as a designer.

Below is the business card design I produced in level 5.

Through using this branding on various presentation bards for live and competition briefs this year, I have played around with the layout of the branding and think something like the design I have used on my manifesto presentation gives my visual identity a little bit more of a neater and professional outcome.

Therefore I have tried to apply this simplistic version of my branding to various other pieces of stationary I intend to include in my brand pack.

Below you can see my new business card option which I am much happier with.

The new design creates quite a modernist feel, but I want the visual element of my identity do remain both simple and consistent throughout my entire brand and I believe that this layout would allow the main core to remain the same throughout while using the thin text at the bottom to update information depending on what format the logo is applied to.

Front Variation 1
 

Front Variation 2 (chosen)

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